Change of Plan

After reading the examiners report and correlating the results of our questionnaire we have decided to alter sections of our music video.

The introduction - We are adding an introduction to the music video before the song starts. Our main protagonist will be leaving the house party and as he's walking away we will hear the start of Stella in the background and this will lead into the video.

Football - We are adding a section where the main protagonist and the band will be playing football where they see the girl with another guy. The band will then be supportive and it will show them in a good light.

The band - From the examiners report we were reminded that this is supposed to be a promotion video for a band and we only have performance shots of the band included so we have decided to have the band as our main protagonists friends at the house party trying to help him get over her. This will show the band in a good light as good friends which will make them more likable. We will also have more performance shots in the video.

The bottle - It also said to avoid copying the lyrics with showing footage of what the lyrics said so we have decided to remove the breaking bottle.

We are going to wait until the first edited draft to see if the falling to the bathroom floor looks to comical and cheesy and also to see if the cover of the song will fit the rest of the narrative.